All Comments on 'My Brother's Ghost Pt. 03'

I like that you are interjecting some mystery into the story.

I am not what you would call a bra man, so the Waterfalls are to mountains what bras are to tits, seemed not to fit (IMHO). I prefer tits to be bare and free, allowed to jiggle under shirts and sweaters and allow there nipples to poke through the fabric of a woman's top. This is just me and a personnel preference. I would have used something like "waterfalls are the eyes of the mountains, it allows us to see the inner beauty" but this is just me.

As for the story, I like the hints, although (Maybe i missed it) when Scott mentioned that a woman went missing but he had not heard about a guy going missing, wouldnt Amanda think that her brother may have been living as a woman 24/7 or at least going out as a woman, and I assume Scott is a local, so he might have seen Kevin in his Femme form? Maybe this will be suggested in future chapters, but I just thought it might have triggered Amanda to assume her brother was living more like a woman than a man. It might also have been mentioned by the roommate, whom she did not speak to, but I am enjoying it so far. thank you

A must read from 1 via 6 ... Do not pass this up.