All Comments on 'My Brother's Keeper Ch. 01'

Its got potential, but strange how 1 1/2 pages of writing seems far too short for a proper start in this case. I hope you'll be posting more soon as this is really hanging on substance.

I thought this story was amazing in it's tone of stark realism, and all the more so for it being written by a female from a male's pov. It had meat, feeling and thought, and left me wanting more.