All Comments on 'My Brother's Slave'

her brother isnt her real brother just like the mother and dad are not so itsnot incest

second this kind of belongs in nonconsent

...but the last comment beat me to it. What they just said.

Most comments should say the same thing. This belongs in the trash can.

I would have added a Noncon or Nonconsent tag, personally. That or submitted in the Nonconsent/Reluctance category with the tags you have. The story is good, don't let the ither commentors dissuade you, but a lot of people here really dislike even properly categorized Noncon stories.

Terrible trashy story!

Once she started, she was hooked.

Nothing or tender, but so sexy

First you say the pos step father had the mom as a rebound and just stayed because she didn't care he was an asshole. So why would he marry her? She died when she was 2 yet he was already remarried by 3. If he did not adopt her she would not have stayed with him after moms death. Where is rest of her and her bio Dads family? They are who would have gotten custody. Why do you have her talk shit about being Irish? She is 20 and stays in an abusive home? No story line how she went from you will suck my dick daily to him fucking her in the prequel. Story is all over the place no consistency except rapist brother. Zero explanation why while family hates her. Sad sorry over done rape story. She has no blood relation to anyone so not incest

There's a paragraph early on page 1 where you switch between she/I pronouns. Otherwise, very well-written.

Good story.

Looking forward to her next sex visit.

Wasn't she a virgin before Bryan fucked her?

You should definitely continue. Love the story line and the dominanice of the situation. I'd love to see more, great job ❤

1) Not incest. No blood relationships.

2) Retarded girl. Who stays in an emotionally and physically abusive environment

after age 18?

3) Felonious rape of a mentally challenged person. Distribution of this sewage

("story") is probably illegal for both the writer and Literotica.

Are you going to continue the story? I would love to hear what happens next