All Comments on 'My Brother's Widow'

This is one of the best stories I have read on here. You should be proud of it. I will be looking for more from you on here...Hank

......super, well crafted, intelligent story. Just keep 'em coming, and I'll keep on reading 'em! Many thanks.

<p>I liked some parts of this story but things happened way too fast. You peppered the plot with touching scenes like being at the zoo, and their first date, but your timeline for their romance was much too compressed. By the end, it seemed amusing that she would be pregnant and then they would schedule the wedding.</p><p> As for the major conflict; if after only six weeks she is seeing multiple men then he is almost obligated to say something in protection of his nephew. His 'HIV' comments did not merit her response and I was aghast at how timidly he conceded his concern. It also galled me that she and she never apologized for her assault upon him. And yes, it WAS an assault.</P><p>This story should have been better. All the elements were here but I thought you failed to deliver.</P>

This story deserves much more than a 5 rating! One of the best stories I have read on LIT. Keep up the great work and I'll be sure to read everything you write!

I hope you don't pay much attention to some of these self- appointed "Literary Critics". Just being a plain old ordinary person myself, I loved the hell out of it. I think you have a real talent for writing this kind of story, P.r.

Please keep them coming (no pun intended).

She's already back on the dating scene only a mere six weeks after becoming a widow? Then she must not have loved her late husband at all.

what a good read, yes some of the timing was a bit out (a lot) it is a story after all, I thought it wasn't that well paced as it just got faster and faster, but overall a good read, the people were well fleshed out as far as was wanted, so I'm looking for more from you.

I like your story very much!

So the guy dies and tge wudiw has already shagged 3 guys that we know of before 6 six's have passed- including husbands brother.

What kind of horribke heartless cunt is she?

cathy was a selfish slut dumping her kid and going out with trash with a barely buried husband. she was worth a roll in the hay, but I would never marry a sorry skank like her.

He drops his girl friend suddenly after his brother dies and marries his sister-law. That is technically incest since his blood nephew is now his step son!

He and his sister-in-law share zero DNA. They are not related by blood. Doesn’t matter about the kid.

The practicality of the story makes it more erotic . Loved it .....

Cathy doesn't deserve him, she loses her husband and becomes insta-slut. He shouldn't have wasted his time with her. 3/5

Really beautiful story.