All Comments on 'My Bully Owns My Family Ch. 01'

Can't wait to ready chapter 2

I can read almost anything and enjoy it but this is just plain fucked-up. Sorry man just not for me.

Came to it! Good job

Between his "best" friend being an absolute dick, the half hearted handjob from his sister barely qualifying as possible incest, his complete submission to his mothers words and no reason per se for the cuckhold tag.

Not a bad idea behind it but it would been better suited to one of the other categories say possibly Non Consent

Yes its fucked up, thats why I love it lol . The complainers here should go and read Enid Blighton or somethin lol

Don't be discouraged by the haters(they masturbate their hateful little dicks regardless of what they write in the comments), so keep writing;)

This is really good, in a twisted perverted way! Definitely need to continue on!

i loved it and wud love to see more

1 star

Another chapter please. He needs to be made to watch marcus fuck his mom and sister.

I'm hoping that in a later chapter Marcus fucks both him and his Mom at the same time. Great story though.

Oh I just finished chapter two And it is just so perfect. I had cum to chapter one and eaten my cum like a good sissy does and then I moved on to chapter two and must admit I came again. It is just so perfect. 4yourpleasureiam

This is shaping up nicely! Looking forward to chapter 2! 5*

Just found this story and absolutely adore it!! I'd love my family to treat me like that with a black man............. Please write more, his family should all worship Marcus' big, black dick. His mummy and sister should prove their submission and worship of Marcus by carrying his children in their fertile white wombs.

How come this story doesnt have any comments, it should be one of the best stories in Literotica and wonder why author stopped with just few stories !!!

Is absolute garbage. I think this is in the wrong area for one. And its just sick for another

The premise is intriguing, but its rushed. Develop and flesh out the characters more, they accept it way to fast ruining the plot. Unless like they were already planning this, you need to include some more human elements, like make some of the family dislike him for his interest. Oh actually the most important aspect your missing is a good conflict nothing so far is really opposing eachother. Every obstacle is eqsily brushed off

Hi there Danny and your slut mom Debbie!!!

Hello my name is James and my friends are coming over to get on the bed and hit not only your ass but you're gonna be watching

Loved it was short but made my fatt cock pussy hott and wett and the haters dont admit it but they secretly want to have a big black cock in their mouths or fucking therebitches while they watch there bitches pussy destroyed by the biggest black dicks u could think of and then cleaning her well fucked pussy when that big black Dick shoots a huge load of that thick hot sticky cum all up inside your bitches white pussy oh fuck yeah i love it and so does all these other sick twisted perverted little clitty dick white sissy boys do to so dont listen to them cus deep down they want to submit to the bbc like them white bitches do.. I know my wife and her sexy ass twin sister does and i only hate that i dont get to clean sissys pussy yet but i will. Cus im a sissy little panty boy and i want to suck big black dicks and so do yall

Ralphina loves to crossdress and suck black cock in the forest preserve.

Ralphina enjoyed this writing especially when she got her fanny spanked by Marcus and had to wear her baby doll nighty and panties for everyone at her birthday party.

Please finalize the storyline. . More on mom and son. More on how marcus loves fucking the tiny chaisty cage clit Dad with the big bubble ass . .

I thought it was great from the spanking by the bully and the sucking of his cock to finally putting on the pink babydoll nighty, it made me cum in my panties.

By Ralphina, I love a sissy spanking before sucking black cock 😋

Concerningly - this is hot!

I absolutely love this story kinda wish it didn't have the race play elimat but other then that wonderful