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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
my busty friend

Not a bad tale, all-in-all, but the ending is rather abrupt.

What would be a nice finishing touch is taking us back to where you started--Jess' gravelly voice, and maybe squeezing those big tits a farewell for the moment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I agree with anonymous

Everything was right until the story just ended without a conclusion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bad

This sounds like it was written by a 14 year old boy with help from a bot

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The best part of writing is reading your comments! I look at all the feedback on my stories trying to decide on the most popular themes. Massage? Early experiences? Swinging? Your comments decide which of my forty unfinished stories gets more attention!