All Comments on 'My Cheating Girlfriend'

... of whatever plot there was.

Some very hot stories (the most plagiarized ever - the reason TonyTony3 quit posting) had the woman doing a one night stand and telling the husband about it - the stroke was in her telling of it - the woman was the narrator and the fact it was adultery was low-keyed

But the author here did none of that - the girl friend was a slut - only the first episode came close to being hot.

What kind of pathetic shut-in trolls around the stories making baseless accusations of plagiarism in regards to smut? Sorry, dude. You may think you're an expert, but you've just proven yourself a fool.

Jasoncandor, the previous reviewer did not accuse you of plagiarism, but merely said your story was similar in theme to a much-plagiarised story.

Sorry, J., but I just found this rather depressing. It's increasingly clear she's both dumb and will fuck anything with a pulse, but he still sticks with her for no apparent reason I could fathom. Throw in the 'massive cock' cliche, and there's really nothing here either original or notable.

Move Out...why stay and get abused, a piece is not worth it!

Ok but not erotic.

Just depressing

It's hot, I dig the humiliation stuff.

It seems a little scattered though. Go back through and edit it when you're not jerking off to it.

I really dug how you didn't have the male character being a complete pushover. He did what all typical guys would do, investigating their girlfriend's Facebook, email, and texts. Most stories with this kind of theme don't do this and it's fucking annoying. So I'm incredibly impressed with the fact that you made this situation very realistic. I think this story would've been much better if you had more dialogue between the girlfriend and boyfriend instead of just describing things as being "fine for a few days", etc. It would've really made the ending of the story much more hot.

Thanks for the story though. Very hot!

I love her! Exactly like my pretty blonde super sexy big tittes British ex hot as gf! I loved kissing her after she snuck off for a few days fucking some guy. I knew she had cum in her mouth on her perfect tuts and in her gorgeous wet puss but I loved licking up any of her bfs big cum filled balls and cock if I got to have sex with her! Yumm. Soo hit and soo jealous! I miss her and would do anything to get back with her! Hot sexy bitch ! I want to cum on your breasts and lick it all up for you like a little slut babydoll.. Mm

In recent years, the average quality of writing on Literotica seems to have gone way downhill. I'm pleased to say that this story is most definitely an exception.

I came across this story this morning when looking for porn videos of something similar. Since I hadn't read any erotica in a while, I decided, "What the heck." I was left with an intense, pleasurable pain after getting off to this (three times, no less), because it cut to the core of this particular fetish for me, in all of its messy, subconscious glory. I get the sense that the author really understands the underlying mechanics of the cuckold fetish, and as such, this story ended up far surpassing any cuckold porn movie I've ever seen.

Nice work, please keep writing more.

You should of let the guy leave her to her own self distructive behavior.

That is a story of a bunch of fucked up morons! Nuff said!

The emotional realism was so good. You did a cool job of balancing your arousal with your pain... which is just how it really is, right? Sexy story... makes me want her. hit me up if you want... dayzednconfused1@yahoo.com... i get a lot of junk mail, so put Literotica in the subject.

...and not knowing who the real father is.

What a Cuck wimp. I mean, I get waiting until you have verified proof. But this guy had no balls. Dude deserves what he gets.

This turns me ON! I'm looking for my own slutty girlfriend!

Damn, I love this story and ADORE this girl!!

I want to get fucked so bad like like a ducking whore just filled over and over again by other dudes like a train or even like go out to a bar seen in public leaving with different men separately then coming back to the same bar wearing a minke skit with no underwear and having some cum drop down I wouldn’t care if anyone could see and just like go duck in bathroom because I would be so impatient and hopefully a few men just wait in line to fuck me like a fucking slut cum dumpster and cut in my face and forget to wipe some off fuck I’m so wet and horny damnit I need fucked hard Tonight FL

LOSER TRASH CUCK AND THE SLUT

Very good story. It is just this is not the 1800's, guys in story and comments, show such shock that wives are having sex with so many men. Never once surprised me when wife or girlfriend told me of all their previous past and current lovers. The only one that shocked me sort of told me about many of her past lovers, back to age 13, that she remembered, wasn't really necessary to mention them all. What shocked me a little was that it was two years after we were married before she started mentioning guys she had had sex with when were were going together and after we were married. She said it was an embarrassment to her. I told her why would I ever doubt she had, I just did not like her feeling she had to lie. She was relieved and no more lying.