by RyFerrel
This is a 13 year old story, very stupid. 10 seconds after she first screamed a hall full of guys would have ripped him apart. They are supposed to be in a dorm! Very stupid setup.
words---"The ASS ..............."
Its a good start man, especially for your first story. Keep it up, even keep going with this one if you want.
Oh and feel free to ignore the comment above, notice how the 'nicest' people are always anonymous? :P
Not like he writes any stories. But good job, and hope to read more of ya.