All Comments on 'My Cousin Jo and I Pt. 05'

by uncledickme

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va45va45over 8 years ago
good build up

Very good start and setting the stage.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Good...

...dialogue and interaction between the 2 of them. It's really building up. Run-ons still an issue, but 5 anyway.

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