All Comments on 'My Cousin Jo and I Pt. 07'

I'm looking forward to more - but I really don't want this story to end !

This story just keeps getting hotter and better :-) Greatjob!

The story would be more fun if you made it a little more realistic. There's no way a cock of any size hits the back wall of a uterus -- there's a little thing called the cervix in the way.

...Christy in is a real mistake to the story arc, since at that point, Jolene sounds like a real slut instead of the girl that only wants Richard. The idea of a threesome might appeal to some, but it turns me off, as it's not consistent with her wanting the 'security' of knowing she'll have Richard all to herself.

Run-ons still a problem; because of those and Christy, 4.

First you have the age thing . Then Jo goes from woe is me my dad and brother molested me, too I'm a nympho and I need your dick, to pussy is power?!?

Consistency is important no matter what universe you're writing in.

Oooohhhh, wwwaaahhhhhh!!! This is "TOO MUCH" for some of the poor readers, too many people overwhelms them!

I like the Christy-addition; she seems sweet, and sharing the cousins is 🔥 hot!

I know there is more...do wish you had proofed the stories more, but, "Oh, Well!!"

...I will just power on!

"MADDOG"