All Comments on 'My Cousin Jo and I Pt. 12'

I like it a lot better

Some real progress, still some errors floating around and commas missing but it's getting better. Nice to see Richard admitting eh likes to be loved and not to be treated as a pecs of meat. The whole tampon thing might have been a bit much but at least now we know why Jo is such a domino all of a sudden.

Please either finish or find new plot lines

Great stories, please continue...

plz post part 13

Just keep it going - please !