All Comments on 'My Cousins Made Me their Man Whore Ch. 01'

I found your story quite interesting. I am looking forward to other chapters.

Hope you are doing okay in life.

Thanks for the feedback. Have already submitted Ch2, its awaiting approval :)

Good start enjoying the story so far, looking forward to part 2

I thought this was really well written, realistic, and extremely sexy. Can't wait for the next chapter ♡ wish you luck my love

okay i havent read the story here, just got to the start and it already didnt make alot of sense, you wrote they were elder to you meaning they were older, so you being 19 when it takes place and vishu is 8 years older, making him 27 and puneet 23, yet they share a room, live with there parents, and vishu drinks secretly so his parents dont find out? like who cares hes 27, your story here starts off with them being in there early and late 20's but the way you have the setting and how vishu hides the fact he drinks, makes the story look more like there 8 and 10, the start ruined it for me before i even got to really read it. but honestly keep writing more stories, i may not have gotten into it but i see others have and it most likely is good, just the start ruined it for me

I found the story good but reading it out loud, it didn't flow nor sound right. "...lied on the edge of the bed" should be lay not lied. Example We lay down and lied to our parents.

Example "He was screwing my ass like crazy in within few minutes... " Next sentence "I then realized he was getting stiff..." If he was screwing ur ass how was he NOT stiff? Ch-02 should be read out loud too

My cock was stiff while reading this excellent content and very erotic. Being submissive is so sexy