All Comments on 'My Cousin's Sorority Ch. 07'

by JoeDreamer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Continued too long

Every story has a natural ending point, and this one went a few chapters past it. In your attempt to tittliate without repitition, you've had to portray your characters in a less flattering light. I find that they are developing into people that I am not sympathetic with at all, and the result is that I've lost interest in the story.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 12 years ago
Fun

Great orgy sounds like fun!

Coochielover71Coochielover714 months ago

This is some story.

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