by xXVanessaXx
What rubbish do you expect a girl to be a virgin at 18 just come to know someone in college get so lose with her father on meeting him the first time only slut and whore do that not virgin mature up a bit with yout creativeness.
I think u should continue writing... Maybe even a chain of stories with the same two characters
What kind of virgin just ups and fucks her friend's dad like that? Was she a slut in others ways besides using her pussy or something? I find it hard to believe a barely legal virgin would just fuck someone. What kind of person is she to do her friend's father and have been a virgin? If she was experienced, that would have been belivable.
this was a hot story. i think that you should continue it because it has room to go lot's of places.
The story should have been little long. There should have been more foreplay. The story could take interesting turns if Ben & Vanessa continue their affair
I enjoyed it alot..I do wish to know what happen between the two of them!