All Comments on 'My Dad's Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Pretty Good!

A pretty good story! Maybe the next chapter could/should occur after Jake & Cerys get married! Maybe they could get mom, dad, & sister involved in their bedroom actions?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good ending...

I usually don't go for stories where the guy is a jerk, but this ending makes it work. I wouldn't change a thing, and you don't really need to have a sequel.

Please keep writing...

cb1251cb1251almost 9 years ago
Actually....

This could have gone better, but for now it's hard for me to decide who is the bigger asshole in all of this - Noah, or Jake

All three of the ladies deserve better than this, and I can't see any attempt by Cerys to blackmail the baby- daddy ending well.

Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So now to knock up the Mom and then

So now to knock up the Mom and then obviously it would be the turn of the sis.

Since the Dad is no longer able to seed the women, it is the son's duty to be the man of the family.

The father in such a situation should keep away and let he son expand his harem of knocked up women.

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