All Comments on 'My Daughter's Friend'

by lashanda

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bad...just awful!

Unrealistic....unedited....hardly any sex!

StangStar06StangStar06over 12 years ago
Great job

Great story and very realistic. Two lonely people riding each other. A union that probably shouldn't have happened but did to the mutual satisfaction of both. If this had been a fantasy they'd have fallen in love and gotten married. But realistically both knew that it was just something that happened and they went on with their lives. Great work. Good writing.SS06

duke1041duke1041over 12 years ago
Too Short

I disagree that it is "Unrealistic". A very simiular occurrence happend to a friend with his wife's friends daughter. I would have liked more sex with all the juicy details. Keep at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
"and we promised each other this would never happen again."

Bullshit

it will, and often

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
It absolutely MUST

happen again...and again (and lots more juicy detail please)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
im sorry

I agree with the first comment, get help with your writing i felt like a 6 year old was telling me the story with all the "and then," "then i was like," made me want to scream. best luck next time or not

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Where's the law

that says erotica must be realistic? It's fun, it's fantasy, it's entertaining. What was the last man-flick you saw that was realistic? Ghost Rider? Terminator? Die Hard? Godfather?

lashanda: ignore the asswipes out there. Your stories are good. I hope to see more of them. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

We more mature fans love the fantasy! Keep it and us up and interested in life.Will definitely read more.

ramonbrookramonbrookover 10 years ago
WOW, excellent story! But .......

There needs to be more chapters of Henry and Laura! We know there is more to tell and why shouldn't there be! They both wanted it and they are both consenting adults!

Age thing should NEVER be a consideration if both people are in love!

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