by lashanda
Great story and very realistic. Two lonely people riding each other. A union that probably shouldn't have happened but did to the mutual satisfaction of both. If this had been a fantasy they'd have fallen in love and gotten married. But realistically both knew that it was just something that happened and they went on with their lives. Great work. Good writing.SS06
I disagree that it is "Unrealistic". A very simiular occurrence happend to a friend with his wife's friends daughter. I would have liked more sex with all the juicy details. Keep at it!
Bullshit
it will, and often
happen again...and again (and lots more juicy detail please)
I agree with the first comment, get help with your writing i felt like a 6 year old was telling me the story with all the "and then," "then i was like," made me want to scream. best luck next time or not
that says erotica must be realistic? It's fun, it's fantasy, it's entertaining. What was the last man-flick you saw that was realistic? Ghost Rider? Terminator? Die Hard? Godfather?
lashanda: ignore the asswipes out there. Your stories are good. I hope to see more of them. Keep up the good work.
We more mature fans love the fantasy! Keep it and us up and interested in life.Will definitely read more.
There needs to be more chapters of Henry and Laura! We know there is more to tell and why shouldn't there be! They both wanted it and they are both consenting adults!
Age thing should NEVER be a consideration if both people are in love!