All Comments on 'My Daughter's Friends'

It's either Shar or Megan the second time around. Don't confuse the names, it detracts from the story.

Did I miss a reference to his wife?

You only had a vague reference to a wife or lack of in the story. You may want to address that in later stories. A little more backstory on what the kids were like growing up and how long the daughters mom was out of the picture would help also, it would change the gals motivations if he was a widower or a divorcee and when it happened.

Please continue will you f*ck these girls again and put a little more detail into it.

Don't leave it too long before you publish the next instalment, please !

Ok, so either you don’t proofread your stories before you publish, or Megan must have snuck into your house while you were getting busy fucking the fat girl...