by Imstillfun
Please let us know if you plan more of this one. Another great job!
Good story. Well written. You did a good job of taking an improbable situation and making it seem okay and appropriate for the mother to go ahead. Sex as normal. How unusual.
I enjoyed reading that as it seems to have been written by an adult unlike much of the garbage here.
One thing: "I was down to 135". 135 what? Pounds? Kilos? Tons?
I've been eagerly waiting for more. I love it! Long overdue! Write MORE! MORE! MORE! bg61
Great writing, imagery and eroticism all wrapped up in a yummy taboo package!
Amazing!! So Fucking Hot! One of the best stories I have read in a long time!! Please, MORE!
Would rate this a 10!! Great build up, erotic sexy scenes and a climactic ending!! Bravo!! Love it. On of my all time favorites on Lit.
Every story that you have written has got just better and better. As you add more emotion the hotter it seems to get. I can't wait for your next offering; well done....
I'm still fun... yes you are! Fun and terrific and intense. This was one of your best, although I like a lot of your work. The whole conflict between Right and wrong, the inner turmoil, the self talk just added to the story, gave the character depth. You didn't over do the background story, with too much detail or brush by it so none of the inner drives made sense. No this entire piece worked well. The energy and build up were well paced and the like mother like daughter ending fit perfectly. Thank you and keep up the good work
Great exciting story.. I LOVED it. Even though I knew what was coming it was still intense and hot !! Nice job !
Thanks for this. It is a situation I have not read before. VERRY HOT Stroked all the way through it and had to stop before I messed up my favorite chair. Keep up the good work, rest assured that you are keeping mine up. LOL Thanks again
Raymond
A really great story from beginning to end. Love your work.
This story is so lame..where is the incest? Instead it's about an imaginary large cock with a bastard for a heart. Anyway, story was somewhat hot when the mother and daughter had a chance to get together, but to find out that they are only to be used and abused by some loser...well it's very disappointing!
Great story can't wait for Chapter 3 in the shower and they sleep cuddled together after their first incest night together
Chapter 4 Ben returns and all 3 enjoy the night and morning together
Chapter 5 Ben and Greg come over
As always I enjoyed your story. I have 3 comments to make. 1) I think most of your stories could be better if you were to draw them out some more, a slower build up. 2) Not every man has to be 6 ft of taller to be a stud\dominant\sexgod 3) Not every woman is sexier with a bald pussy.
If course these are just my opinions. But I firmly believe that if you draw them out and prolong the anticipation it will improve them. (And mixing things up with the 'stud' and the woman's grooming habits)
As I read along, I got the idea of trying to count the number of times the Monica character a) wondered what was wrong with her and/or something was "disgusting?" b) how frequently (was it every paragraph there?) she "stood there" frozen, capable only of staring and other autonomic nervous system functions (apparently).
I get the need to have devices that generate suspense, but after the nth time, it gets really old and it becomes a struggle the stop thinking you're trying to portray someone with an emotional IQ significantly less than her age.
What's wrong with me that I'm being so critical? It's disgusting! My fingers are freezing on the keyboard, poised to type ................
Older woman interested in daughters stud. Yum. Would have liked it if Ben would bring his buddy to double penetrate the hot Mom at the end.
5 stars!
Мне нравится такая тема. Морган современная девушка понимающвя толк в сексе. И Моника чья жизнь не блестит красками жизни подается соблазнам откровенного местами извращеного но очень красивого секса. Мама и дочка теперь не смогут да и не захотят что либо менять в своей жизни.
Loved it, the uncertainty, the desire, neglected woman finally satisfied. Setting the stage for long lasting deeper connection with daughter....naughty family.
Thank you for the rush!
This was a great balance of the mental - the mind fuck - and the physical/erotic. It was really seductive the way the mom was just sucked in to the whole situation. This is a story that demands a sequel...hopefully more than one...
Wow. As a hard and horny man, I really enjoyed reading this story. It gives me the best pictures in my head. Thank you 🍆👅♥️😘
I know I've said this about 3 times in comments today, but your stories are SO ripe for sequels! Sequel this one with Ben and Greg coming over and DPing the Mom. 5 stars on a very dirty tale.
There is no question that the author set the stage nicely for Monica to take on Ben and Greg. Two young virile studs for the horny milf.
Great writing, Love that you take time to develop your characters, their emotions, conflicts followed by great sex. Love all your stories
This is an absolutely crazy good erotic story. SOOO naughty...he he!
Written with beautiful description and motion.
I absolutely LOVED it!.
Can't wait to read your other stories. If they are half as good I am going to have a lot of fun in the coming days/weeks...ha ha
XX
I love your writing style. This was one of the best so far. Thank you for sharing
After all the delicious sex that's already happened in the story, I love the way you finish leaving us to imagine mom and daughter together in the shower! The erotic buildup between mom and daughter is beautifully handled.
Your description of mom's struggles with her own feelings adds realism as well as erotic piquancy to the story, and you do it brilliantly.
Absolutely loved it!
Sarahxxxxxxx
Such great imagery that brought on instant erection and later ejaculation. Mom and daughter I never had but dreams can always come true.
Another hot story from this author , but oh so short ,so much more could be added to this , How ever nothing i don't think could top Tori's wedding gang bang , loved everything about that story was absolutely mind-blowing , eagerly waiting for more and a sequel to this one , you are now my favorite author , only giving this a 4/5 , because of the shortness of it ,where i gave Tori's wedding gang bang 10/5 , keep up the great work ❤🧡💛💚.
Great 21st century story. It is a bit like form and function in architecture and all of modern life. Morgan is looking for a job and her Mom is looking for excitement, having completed her primary life function. He is looking for sex to mix with capital accumulation. Everyone wins - that should be our goal and Literotica helps us recognize it. Absolutely perfect tailored concierge service puts sex workers in a higher and higher echelon - as they should be as they can provide the highest levels of happiness and joy.
I don't know if it's me, or a general thing, but I sometimes think in terms of the "James Bond" test. Those movies are thoroughly unbelievable...pure fantasy. To pass the James Bond test your story has to be so good that nobody cares about reality. This story is. The most brilliant stories about sex aren't really about bodies rubbing together. They're about people's desires...their demons, their hungers, the things they're afraid to feel, and the way they pursue them. Here, the sex is grand, but what really raises it to the next level is how Monica works through her issues, in the end forced by her own hungers to accept her own pleasure. That's what great erotica is all about.
To me, you could virtually call it a sub-genre of erotic stories: those that really plumb the psyche, as much as describing sexual pursuits. It's the hunger, the psychological/libidinal journey, that clinches it. Anais Nin, JYM, others that write pure psychosexual dreams...so much hotter than just friction.
Beautiful work.
This is one of your stories totally ripe for a sequel. Ben and Greg come over when Morgan is away. Morgan had secretly arranged it. Ben and Greg satisfy Monica as only Imstillfun can describe best. Morgan turns the tables by watching her.