All Comments on 'My Daughters Roommate'

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ramonbrookramonbrookover 9 years ago
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Dang love this genre of erotic literature! And this story Does not disappoint!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
uninspired dull

ordinary. no plot twists. almost no plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
LACKING DIALOG

Look at the third from the last paragraph. Imagine how that narration could have been dialog of effective conversation between the two.

Instead, it's like a reporter telling what happened without emotional involvement.

Great plot idea.

But carried out in a so-so, drab way.

3 stars

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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Well my cocks hard

Cheers Caferacer1960

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