All Comments on 'My Dearest Becky Pt. 01'

by Betrayer_of_Skalathrax

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Storm113Storm113over 8 years ago
thank you

Thank you for continuing this story. I really like these characters and enjoy your storytelling a lot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thanks

Finding a way to continue your story after having suddenly lost your real life Becky inspiration is an inspiration. Well done Marine!

macaonghaismacaonghaisover 8 years ago

Thank you for continuing the story!

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 8 years ago
I really liked it...

and at the same time, it does play hell with SOME memories. I sincerely hope that the GOOD parts will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I have a deployed marine in my life so the emotions here are very real. Keep it up it makes me feel closer to him.

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 3 years ago

good story from the beginning of Beckys Marine, nice writing mixing scenes from the guys being deployed with the relatives ledt behind. Kudos for the story by author and the editors and mentors also

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I served 4 years in the Marines and now work at one of the largest refineries in California.

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