by Sir_Intuit
You are one of the best writers—maybe the best—I've read on this site! I mean: you know how to use the English language almost flawlessly. I had to stop reading once or twice to finger myself to orgasm. Mmmm! I could have done without the pissing games. I'll never take part in that, but the rest of the action was hot as fuck, and as I said, it made me... It made me wild!
A couple of tiny typos, and one mis-used word (phase for faze), but other than that this is nothing but unbelievable erotic mania.
Amy in Seattle