All Comments on 'My Dream of the Girl Next Door'

Girl next door fantasies are usually a good place to start. Wasn't bad. Good description of her and of the sex, but some of the details weren't that great (they didn't kiss at all?!). Overall still a pretty good story.

You would have had a good story, but your writing was lacking in spelling and grammer. Be sure to proof it before you post. Other than that, good job.

HOLY SHIT!!!! hehe