All Comments on 'My Dream Office'

by Taffe

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redlion75redlion75almost 7 years ago

If not for the cheating on her husband this would be perfect

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Story, but....

I really liked the story, but learn to EDIT!!! Many times the wrong word or spelling was used that broke up the continuity of the story. Please keep writing, but if spell check makes a suggestion, look at what the word is!

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

Enjoyable story.

A little implausible but a fun idea, the punishments were a little repetitive and boring.

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

Great story, pity about the poor proofreading and editing.

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