by daveman71
Very nice, extremely nice.
A little present tense corruption with the story..but all and all...this is highly imaginable. Keep on writing.
What a romantic and erotic story. I'm going to get my partner to read it so he can see EXACTLY how a woman wants to be loved and seduced. I'm reading it going, "Yes! That's it!"
Lucky Melissa.
LoveFetish, sorry it's been two years before seeing your comment, but one thing I was taught by a few special women in my life is... take it slow. Tease. Make her beg. Be a gentleman. And make her want you not to be! Wishing you all the best...