All Comments on 'My Ebony Rose'

Okay i thought this was an okay story...but my one problem was..do people really talk like this? umm The language just seemed a little to formal

I was in an interacial relationship for some years and noted all to well the events in this story. Loved the story, it was told as though I was standing next to the person telling it. Good work and thankyou.

I really liked the story but I must say that it would have been so much better for me if it was edited a little more before it was posted. There were way too many exclamation marks in the story so it always seemed like they were yelling. Also the narrator's name was Bill but beginning on page two he kept referring to Anthony as Bill. And lastly, the word "that" kept being used instead of "than" in a few places. But other than those 3 things the story was very enjoyable to read. Good Job overall just proofread and edit a little better.

Prologues go at the start. Epilogues are at the end.

totally awesome i loved it.

It was a nice story, but the romance was rushed and the speech was too formal.

Loved the fact you let us know what life was like down the line for them. It was nice knowing they stayed married and had a beautiful life.

This story was extremely inspiring and the most beautiful story I have ever read

It was a great story, very well done. The conversations were at times stilted and too formal. But the confusing thing was that Bill and Anthony apparently switched names from time to time. Lastly, a 4,000 square foot deck???? If it was square it would be about 63 feet by 63 feet! How big was this house???

Bill shoots a man dead and takes off?

I just don't see the police accepting that.

Bill beats up one gang member and shoots another dead, so the gang leaves the area?

Admittedly they don't seem like much of a gang, but if they take that they are going to be seen as punks by all the other gangs and wiped out.

Newsflash, if you don't like a topic, don't click on it... It's so cowardly when someone posts racist hate filled comments and chooses to remain anonymous. It's also really perplexing to me that this same person, who has such an issue with interracial stories, chose to click on and read an interracial story(probably several), then rant and rave about black people being ugly and sexually inept (Anonymous Is that person who spews all of this hate, but goes home and jerks off to "ebony" porn). You want it so bad, but you've probably been turned down by every black person you've ever hit on, have fun jerking off. Your poor grammar & glaring spelling mistakes paint a really good picture of who Anonymous is. Now to the story, I liked it, it was a little rushed, but a quick read, kudos to anyone who posts a story.

Hey anon,

You're embarrassing us. Please stop that shit forever.

Signed,

White People Everywhere

Your tale was one of best, beautiful, and loving stories that I have ever read on this web site.

If we leave out the gang bits where the ideas went incredible (As in bullshit) (whoever heard of a gang backing off from a couple? Ever? The rest of the love story was very good. It needed a bit more detail on what the brother had said to the sister and if she ever found out that he had called her an ugly lesbian, how the protagonist had (if ever) thanked his benefactor etc etc

The inter racial Sex problems are totally believable for the USA. In the UK nobody normal gives a damn about what race your partner is, unless you live in the boondocks and the locals are poor and ignorant enough to hate everyone

Good effort

Love the story. It was very well out together. AAAAAA++++++