All Comments on 'My Ex-Mom Ginny Pt. 01'

Pleaae stop writing. It's painful to read.

PLEASE don't make this all about the son simply watching his mom be a whore. I HATE son-cuckolding worse than anything. I would rather see the boy step up, grow some balls and some dignity and do what his dad apparently can't. Some genuine feelings of disgust, revulsion, anger and betrayal running counter to his arousal would make the story more immersive and true to life. In the very last line, you allude to something horrible, which I assume is the main character witnessing his mother's depravity. It is important not only to the realism of the plot, but to the complexity of the mother's character that she feel some degree of shame for slipping back into old habits. Please don't make her out to just be a one-dimensional black cock slut. That's just boring to me. Also, you've got 'love' in the tags for this story. Who is that supposed to be directed toward exactly?

Horrible grammar, misuse of punctuation, poor spelling...just impossible to read.

Horrible read. Grammar and punctuation all over the place. You "stay in california" is not how most people speak here. Just don't release Pt. 02!

Hot! Cant wait for part 2!

It doesn't even get 1 star

Thank you guys for your feedback....

I'll try to improvise my mistakes

....in the civilised world you be ostracised but I can guess where you're from.

You made the son a bit spineless.But for the title(ex-mom) at some point, I think he will confront his mother.

Hopefully the son stays a cuck and spineless in future chapters.

Needs to be more than just this so next chapter please

Incorrectly labeled. Should be interracial.