by Nameless_Rose
A sexy and easy-going story. I could really visualize these two having this adventure. Excellent writing.
It's stories like this that attracted me to Lit so long ago - erotic, playful, intelligent, and beautifully written. Your characters were well defined, and the story itself a total turn-on.
Excellent story, well written. You found a scenario I'd never read before. Bravo!
This is the best story I've ever read. I could tell this was written by a woman it was.perfect. I felt like I was reading one of my favorite fantasie's, thank you.
I never comment on here but I just had to for this.
Amazing! Best story I've read. Please please do a follow up!!
Despite my pen-name, I am male, definitely male, even when dressed in women's clothing, even on the infrequent occasions I have a cock in my mouth. Your story is the nearest I've got to being inside a woman's brain. I like both characters. I love the way the story ends. As a man, I'll be feeling sorry for Owen for the next month, because he would have been thinking, "Wow! I fancy more of that tomorrow night!"
Well, Owen, I think it might be worth sleeping with your hands on top of the blankets for the next 4 weeks. Bring on Round 2! Great story!
Don't, waste a month of your very responsive life. I tried this once, I started a strict program of self denial, I've only skiped one day, and I started yesterday.
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So erotic! But what especially stood out to me that I loved was that the guy asked her before he could do things. A major turnoff in other erotic stories is that the dominant just does whatever they want without making sure the submissive partner is okay with it. Consent was an amazing theme in this story.
That was so intensely amazing and overwhelming. And I also salute how you manage to incorporate asking of permission of the dominant.
I really appreciate the consent and care in this story, it makes it that much more sexy. Well done!
i really liked the way that he asked for a kiss.. that was sweet, and caring. i wish that more men would ask the first time, instead of always assuming they have consent. Beautiful work!
~ slave ana
This is at once highly erotic and so beautiful. I, too, loved that he asked for the kiss, and that they both ask at various points all the way through. The thing that I resonated with most though was his "I could do that all day. I love watching you come." That's exactly my experience - there are many things that turn me on, but there is nothing so arousing as a beautiful woman cum, hard, out of control, over and over again.
Great work!