by fgmntfmgnshn
I have never commented on a story before, but this one is excellent and it did the job I needed it to do! My husband/Master is going to be very pleased with me tonight. Thank you!!
This story is brilliant and I truly enjoyed experiencing it. It was definitely more of an experience than a read. Thank you Sir for sharing your talent!
This may be me personally, but I didn't find this story very realistic. As a female who has no patience for the cheesey rom-coms, this story had me rolling my eyes. You write well, this story was just so unrealistic I couldn't get into it.
I thought this story was very well written (which can be a rarity here) and I was really enjoying it - right up until the bit where Charlie became involved. Probably a personal taste thing (and maybe because I am a mum) but I found the scene where he is being told about his parents lifestyle in front of his naked, kneeling mum such a cringe, and the scene where he is having sex with Andrea in the same room as his parents are having sex a total creepy turn off. I was really enjoying it up until then, but it spoiled the story for me.
I have to admit I was a little skeptical about this when I started but I'm very glad I finished it. It perfectly portrayed one facet of the bdsm lifestyle. Very few people truly understand what it means to be a Master or a Mistress and even fewer can paint such a beautiful picture of it. Bdsm is looked down on by so many people because of slaves and Masters. I'm a switch myself but I love nothing more than knowing I've pleased my Master, especially when Master becomes Mistress. Speaking as a Mistress my sweet boy has all the power. I never cross a boundary he isn't willing to and I always reward him when he's good. Punishment comes, but it's very rare I leave a mark. Speaking as a slave all I want is to hear Master say I've done good. My world revolves around him and pleasing him as best I can. This story made me want to rush to him and have a night of love, not as a slave or as Mistress just as his love. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. I need to have my Master read it when I get to see him again.
...I agree that this story was well crafted and imaginative.
I also find it interesting to read all the differing comments. Each from a different perspective and our different life experiences.
And I find myself agreeing with all of those opposing opinions.
I am contending that each of the individual opinions of this story have an equal validity relevant to our own participation in the lifestyle. Even when peripheral, such as in my case..
I loved this. I was both horny and in tears from laughing so hard. Defiantly happy I read this.
I've recently found you and your writing here on Lit and I'm enjoying your stories. This story however I loved...I wanted it to go on and on. Thank you!