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And why are you submitting this here? Perhaps you should be visiting your English teacher and asking for advice and critique. This isn't the place to perfect your language skills. Have you considered submitting in your native tongue? Well, don't do that either, because minors are not supposed to be allowed to submit. If you aren't still a teenager, you are giving a very good impression of one, even with your weak language usage.