All Comments on 'My Fall and Rise Ch. 02'

Nice follow-up. I hope that you continue to write.

Oh me, I think I’m younger than you but I just feel a deep need to give you a cuddle. I love your descriptive writing, loaded with personal feelings so well put across

This is a sad story of a young woman making the wrong decision, and it shows that being intelligent is no guarantee against messing up ones life and ending up, in extreme cases in choked

Not a favourite subject of mine, but as you follow the story through, you really feel for Melissa and the spiral she finds herself in.

I'm hooked.

I have to read the rest now :)

A scary step over the line, and what an ominous final sentence . "....I did not know that rock bottom was still a long way down." ***** Gutsy stuff.

—- even if there was no sex in it.

Looking forward to where this goes!

Not my usual type of story but, as 'Wkd_Macey' said, "I'm hooked. I have to read the rest".

5 Stars

Drugs …. The horror we are connected to and we are not able to handle them …. Doesn’t matter what kind, hooked its hard to let loose ….. this is truly scary ….. starting in teenage years is to impress to be cool and then you can throw your future in the bin …. It hurts reading a story connected to this, but how much does it hurts parents? … hooked might not the best word, but you are a great writer and so the story is promising

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Another well written chapter, lots to think about.