All Comments on 'My Fall and Rise Ch. 06'

I think I should adopt your style if I decide to write in 'Novels and Novellas' category. Your narration is so crisp yet very exciting. Great!

This reminds me of a party in Majorca but with very different cum connotations. Bags of snow and four of us, two n two. In the morning, trying to clean the room, omg, guy stains everywhere, I’ve never seen so much cum!

What a polar opposite set of bizarre choices for a girl balanced precariously with one broken heel. *****

This just keeps getting better and better (made me cry again).

Why didn't you describe any stories of your pussy getting wet while giving lap dances?

Beautifully harsh. I’m a criminal defense attorney and I’m board certified in juvenile law and you are nailing it. This is harsh in the most beautiful of ways.

"Beautifully Harsh"

What a perfect way to describe this whole series.

Thank you.

Your roller coaster rides are extraordinary ….. bumpy rides, highspeed spiraling downhill then climbing for short peaks into sunlight …. Bang , expecting something different and got the door in the face ….. end of a roller coaster ride, because “ who needs a heart then a heart can be broken “ (RIP Tina Turner)

Wow intense ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨🌹

Last sentence says it all. Melissa is burning bridges!

The overall time structure is a little too confusing. Otherwise, very well done. (The series as a whole up to this point, I mean.)