All Comments on 'My Fantasy Fulfilled'

Too long for a flash piece, but not enough development for an actual story - still, there's possibilities here, and the sex definitely was hot ;)

I hate "to be continued". :)

Was a little short even as a start... I assume it will all pull together in the next installment. The sex was hot, but I hope Chelsea's fantasy was better than what we have read so far... Or that she is not yet fulfilled, that would be sad.

Thank you for your feedback. I'm just getting started with my stories, so its appreciated.

GREAT START! I agree with Arago007, a bit on the short side but hey! Chelsea is one LuCkY gIrL!... I wish "MY FANTASIES WOULD COME TRUE" **grinning** Well Done....

Your turn *smile* (Chapter 02)?

What a great start to what could be a wonderful story. I look forward to reading much more. Your style is fun and easy to read, which is much appreciated given the quality of lesbian stories lately.

Good Job and please keep it up.

Thanks for your hard work.

Doc

Just getting me damp, more please !!!!!

Nicely written once again. I hope you will return.