All Comments on 'My Father-in-Law's Visit'

This is a great start and has the potential for an awesome series, please keep this tale of Ron and Kim going. Good job.

I hope you continue this story as a series. Would be very hot to continue.

wow ! what a narration!! actually I jerked..... lucky RON.

Is the Father in Law going to be a Daddy or a Grandpa? Great story. Hope more chapters are cumming. Thanks.

Sexy story but what me laugh was with amount of alchohol they are drinking they won't even be able to walk, let alone have sex.

Loved the way she played with his sperm from her panties. We need more impreg stories as hot as this one!

One of the best stories I have ever read. It was full of everything one desires from an erotica! PLEASE GET US THE SEQUEL.

I hope one day my daughter in law will seduce me and will use my 8" cock as her hubby. I am mad for her boobs and breathtaking ass.

I had seen her naked and had used her panties for masturbation.

Did he knock her up or not? Is she going to visit him with a round belly? Kind of unsatisfying ending..

So HOT !!! An arousing story of Ron screwing his daughter-in-law. Hopefully, they will have hard sex in their bed soon and this time Ron should cum all over Kim........ hopefully, Ron will move in with them so he and Kim can have sex all day long ...... Thank you.

Great story line. Keep up the good writing!

It's like you read my mind :)

So, did Ron get her bred or is he going to breed her on his next trip? She sure enjoyed his big daddy dick.

Too bad it was not proof-read. Way too many typos and wrongly spelled words.

Has always been a recurring fantasy of mine for my wife to seduce my father. This story is so hot. Thanks

A woman who swallows cum....the best!

He should have licked his dripping cum out of her pussy and had her suck it off his tongue. I love cum play. Especially when he cums all over my 38 H breasts and then licks it all off while nibbling and sucking my nipples. Please have Ron share more in the taste of his own cum!

Older men! I can't wait until I get married!

Their booze budget must be about three or four times my rent and car payment added together. Best of luck Liver.

Hiram Grant

Hot......sexy....can't stop reading. She's quite the tease

to - direction - to the shops

too - as well as - I love you too

two - second number - one, two

Arans = Errands

"pics" doesn't have an apostrophe as it doesn't own anything.

When my wife went out for the night, she came back and told me how sore her pussy was. She said the man that fucked her was huge and he fucked both of her holes. When I looked at her well used pussy, it was still dripping cum down her legs.

I had my job cut out.

Great. Grammar needs some work; otherwise a great read.

read this while staying at my inlaws’ house ;)

This story is 2 pages too long. 4*

Amazing stuff.

loved the buildup great job.. almost lost me with the “arons” instead of errands misspell lol i laughed so damn hard, but i lowered thru cuz this story is fire thanks!

I don't know what to think or say here. This is the second story *ever* that I read here. I went into it thinking it was written by another woman like me. It was fascinating as I realized it was written from a young woman's viewpoint but by a man. I hadn't thought I would be interested in this combination, but it was pretty cool to get inside his head trying to get inside mine? I may come back and comment on specifics of the story later, but for now I'm on to read more and continue to imaginate (and squirm while I do it) writing my own...

Brings back sweet memories of my daughter in law tempting and seducing me. She still makes me a happy father in law, my son has no idea whats going on. 5 stars.

Really bizarre use of tenses. Punctuation mostly incorrect and grammar disaster.

my wife loves showing off to men,but she confessed last week how my dad was starring at her legs,covered in black stockings and her high heels open sandals when we visited my parents,she looked at me and saw i was trying to hide my erection,it turned me on,you naughty boy!you want your wife teasing&flirting with your dad,isn,t it?My dad is spending the next week with us to help with building a garage&other jobs at our property,so keeping it short,and i can,t do anything about it ,wife is the one in control in our marriage,she,s gonna put a hot show on,wearing only miniskirts,no bra,hold ups&thigh highs&wedges or high heels in front of both of us,making me&dad horny and obedient,wishing to fuck my slutty wife,but she said there would be no fucking&touching only looking and if we were so hard,she maybe was gonna take me&dad as her toyboys,but i can tell everyone she,s a kinky beautifull sexy woman who gonna let us jerk off a few times during the day

I found this to be a very erotic story, the buildup was great. Certainly could have used an editor, but still five stars from me

Part of me is like, "shit, that was hot as hell.". But another part of me is like, "damn what a cheating slut. If your partner is promiscuous and likes to show off her body, it's only a matter of time before it escalates into cheating." The husband does seem to be a bit of a bore and the wife does love attention so I suppose it's inevitable. If he's not meeting her needs, she'll get them met elsewhere. And daddy Ron is awfully convenient plus all that.

Gonna read part 2 now. I wonder if they get caught, if she's pregnant, if she'll trade hubby in for Ron. Time to find out.

Agree with donaldelliott11... bad use of tense, grammar poor, spelling terrible and on page two even got Ron and Mike mixed up. Story was good though, a little predictable and no anal but not bad. Would have scored a 5 instead of a 4 if it hadn't been for all those prementioned irritants. Get an editor or perhaps read it back yourself and adjust those mistakes.