All Comments on 'My Favorite Pizza'

by aliceglass

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

Ignore the dickheads that can't understand wife sharing. I'll bet most of them think the man cheating would be fine. Hypocrites. This story was hot and well written. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Enough Said

To chootkahoot...no info on profile...no stories written. Enough said in evaluating his comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
a lot of words...

for a fair story. drawn out but shows some thought behind it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
makes no sense

the wife with no name and her husband Adam are either bored with life, which is understandable in her case as she seems not to be working at all or they just are kind of best friends with benefits. they also have no age which is strange too, nobody knows how long they have been together.

apparantly this is the first time she fucks another guy but only one suggestion from his side is enough to let her do it. no discussion, no questions, no uncertainty. no it's like he said why don't you take this time a Pepsi instead of Coke.

the writing is good the plot is cheaper than in any pornflick and as meaningless

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
the guy

The guy in prison like it, why to some people is it a crime to love your spouse and not want to swap i guess when you think like a loser you become a loser.

roomfor1moreroomfor1moreover 12 years ago
Excellent story - 5 stars

I love your writing style, it is relaxed and it is as though you are here telling me the story in person. It brought the story to life for me and I have to say it is marvellous, keep on writing.

TheVeryIdeaTheVeryIdeaover 12 years ago
Well written

A sexy idea and it worked for me.

beautyandbeast69beautyandbeast69over 12 years ago
Very well written.

I usually fast forward to the good parts. In this story, the good part is right at the beginning and doesn't stop till the end. There were no places to fast forward. This story held my attention throughout. Found your other story through this one which I also enjoyed but I would have to say this was my favorite. I truely hope you keep writting as I feel you have a knack for it. I know I will be watching for future works. Keep it up. Bob

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very well done!

It's a shame you stopped writing . Would loved to hear more details about how her husband reacted to her dates. The sensations he felt as he buried his erection in a very wet, cum filled pussy, or how she tasted as he licked her cum drooling cunt before fucking her brains out. Lots of room for more adventures. You're a good writer. More please ?😊

erotikoserotikosover 3 years ago
Kudos, Nice work!

An exceptionally well written tale, and quite hot sexually to boot. You clearly demonstrate a mastery of the elements and mechanics of good writing—and a damn fine working knowledge of smoking hot sexual encounters. Most impressive work, and a really enjoyable read! A definite 5 * effort!

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago
Low life

A really low life whore taking on a pimply faced pizza delivery guy for her cuck in this piece of shit story.

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