by athf20111
Actually he simply revealed himself to be a wimp, while she revealed herself to be a slut. If you think we are supposed to enjoy the humiliation and degradation of fellow human beings, then you should have been born a Nazi. The dialogue is trite and superficial, the plot so obvious you are the only person who doesn't know what's going to happen next. Just another whack story for the basement dwellers. Hope you get a life someday. Oh, also hope you discover what sex you are. I'm guessing mostly sexless.
Same ole story, have read it a thousand times. Not original or a good story.
Just a question...If the landlord is found dead in a dark alley, he can't collect the rent, does he? I assume this story is any landlord dream: to have a big cock and fuck some young chick late for the rent...If she did this so easily, it's because she has been cheating on him with other guys...Lucky they aren't married yet...He can dump her as soon as his life is in the right track...1*
Put his iphone on record, get Chris blacking you and live rent free for life. Bonus points for sending Chris to jail. This was just plain bad. Bad story telling. Bad characters. Just bad all around. UGH!
The usual trolls surface immediately to rubbish yet another story!
can't wait to see the rest of this really nice beginning, pls continue
Love where this is going, looking forward to the next chapters, very well done.
I liked it!
Be fun if there's a blackmail that locks them into this relationship somehow before having a fun revenge twist!
For a great series. Please publish another. You are one of the best writers on literotica. I keep coming back for more. Hope you publish soon.
You got into financial trouble, so the whore decides to get paid for it. Poor example of a sad genre.
You didn't read it but had to comment. Sad sack, you're just a troll in love with itself
Did you read the shit story or just my comment, you worthless piece of shit.
It can only be rage masturbation and bad memories that compel commenters who search for these stories and read them. They need to come to term with the fact that they’re still struggling with the arousal they experienced when things like these happened to them