by JacobGoody
You swamp us with details about what the other guys look like, as if it somehow mattered to the story, but your story ...doesn't ...go ...anywhere. So promising at first, but ultimately, such a waste of time.
It takes courage to expose yourself to a group of women under the lights. It is a strange experience that is humiliating and empowering.
Going in right direction with great potential! Looking forward to a continuation.1