All Comments on 'My First Gangbang'

Learn what spell check is please

Ill bet this was written by a man, if not please reply here and say so.

There was no development of the characters, it seemed almost emotionless. The stereo type is w worn out one. This young innocent thing seemed will experienced doing Bukkake.

It was difficult to read though my favorite topic because it was so predictable. sorry to be so negative, I get kind of pissed when people do stories about sexual expression beyond their own personal experiences. It comes across like this, mental masturbation/ Instead take something you have experienced and build a fantasy fulfillment story around a core o genuine that instead/

Thank You

Your stories will continue to be trash until you do.

Sorry, must be the bilingual thing. Hard to read. Then again, sorry about the abduction but I am glad all turned out well.