by massageguy64
Reads like it is. There's no point in writing a fictional story if it's about a bad massage. So, taking it as a true story, it's pretty good.
You could have done better. I have been to China more that 30 times. In Hong Kong I have had numerous experiences, the most memorable was one where I met a good looking woman outside my hotel and long story, I got a massage then intercourse and then she stayed the night an fucked me again in the morning