All Comments on 'My First Job'

This is pure pish

Please keep this kind of story to yourself. The story didn't work out very well in English. I'm not even sure if this is an incest story. It just grossed me out, all I can say.

RS

I think this came out more as a

poor advertisement for his services

then anything else.

And simply refering to a stranger as Aunty

does not make them a blood or legal relative...

Damn was that difficult to read.

im so glad that i went straight to the comments after the first paragraph,and favoriting your own story just makes you look silly

keep it up.

kerala is a more reserved state than say Goa. i understand the excitement in your story.

please confine your activity on this site to reading only. you should not waste any more of your time or other peoples time by submitting this garbage

worst grammer and english yet. bad story just awful

Maybe if you wrote in Malayalam the grammar & language would be perfect enough to satisfy the fastidious critics here ! All the best , please keep it up !

are there any men massagers in kolkata who will do full body massage and more for ladies at home?//

IT SHOULD BE TRUSTWORTHY AND CLEAN.

RINA, SOUTHINDIAN HOUSEWIFE 42

rinakrishna3@yahoo.co.in

Totally loved the story.

We are not hear to comment on his English

I would love to massage Indian aunties