by nickiche
come on dont leave me hanging like that ..... its gettin better and better , u had me fixed to it .. more more more please more
I want Nicki and Taylor to have sex and become Girlfriend and Girlfriend cuz I think that would be just sweet and I like sweet.....
i love this story please continue i want to see the girls get together as a couple please make the next chapter longer
I don't even think you need an editor. Your mistakes are glaring and are not that hard to spot and correct yourself. I can't read this series anymore. It sounds so immature. Either stay with the guys or dump them - not both. Guys are not my thing.
OMG!!!! Girls together of course!!!! She doesnt really love the guy never did at least thats what i would like to think!!! Nicki and taylor are ment to be together of course!!!
KEEP THE GIRLS TOGETHER DFINITELY!!! Breakup w/ the boys!..ur story is the first one I have commented on...I LOVE IT!!!!!
It's obvious their in love, they can't be spilt apart. They should dump thier guys reguardless of how "loving" they both are, they belong together.
the girls belong with each other and should end up together. I hope the next chapter is longer as there should be more drama with the guys finally finding out what is going on. Despite the errors, this is well written and emotionally engaging. You have a group of readers rooting for the girls to be with each other, for cryin' out loud!
i've joined just so i can comment and fav this story and your user, absolutly amazingg! keep it up, looking forward to reading the next one =]]
Great story! Read it all in one sitting! :D
Can't wait to read the next one! Im rooting for nicki and Taylor to end up together. Keep them coming!
Great keep up the good work,ditch the males,expand the relationship between the girls,they seem suited,as they should in a romance like this,very interested in how they develop their personalities
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER! They obviously are in love with each other...please finish this and have them break up with their boyfriends >8{!
well, it wasn't..how is 1 page long..?..so frustrated want to know what happens next!