All Comments on 'My First Love - Again Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ah! come on !!!

come on dont leave me hanging like that ..... its gettin better and better , u had me fixed to it .. more more more please more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hmmmmm....

I want Nicki and Taylor to have sex and become Girlfriend and Girlfriend cuz I think that would be just sweet and I like sweet.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

i love this story please continue i want to see the girls get together as a couple please make the next chapter longer

lilbit29lilbit29over 12 years ago
ummmm

Keep it up great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fantasic!

I love cliff hangers! please dont make us wait to long :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Editor

I don't even think you need an editor. Your mistakes are glaring and are not that hard to spot and correct yourself. I can't read this series anymore. It sounds so immature. Either stay with the guys or dump them - not both. Guys are not my thing.

bfflifebfflifeover 12 years ago
UMMMM

OMG!!!! Girls together of course!!!! She doesnt really love the guy never did at least thats what i would like to think!!! Nicki and taylor are ment to be together of course!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
KEEP GIRLS TOGETHER!!!

KEEP THE GIRLS TOGETHER DFINITELY!!! Breakup w/ the boys!..ur story is the first one I have commented on...I LOVE IT!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Keep the girls together!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
They HAVE to stay together!

It's obvious their in love, they can't be spilt apart. They should dump thier guys reguardless of how "loving" they both are, they belong together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
It's obvious...

the girls belong with each other and should end up together. I hope the next chapter is longer as there should be more drama with the guys finally finding out what is going on. Despite the errors, this is well written and emotionally engaging. You have a group of readers rooting for the girls to be with each other, for cryin' out loud!

squish93squish93about 12 years ago

i've joined just so i can comment and fav this story and your user, absolutly amazingg! keep it up, looking forward to reading the next one =]]

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Write the next one ASAP please!!

Great story! Read it all in one sitting! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
GREAT

Can't wait to read the next one! Im rooting for nicki and Taylor to end up together. Keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Love this story ... When's the next chapter?

fingers46fingers46almost 12 years ago
Love it,excellent build up,no sec to speak of but still erotic

Great keep up the good work,ditch the males,expand the relationship between the girls,they seem suited,as they should in a romance like this,very interested in how they develop their personalities

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great!

A really good story, waiting eagerly for a continuation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hurry up with the next chapters. Oh, and make them longer too!

boratigersboratigersabout 11 years ago
PLEASE FINISH THIS!

PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER! They obviously are in love with each other...please finish this and have them break up with their boyfriends >8{!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hurry

You have got to finish this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
u said this was a long one D8..

well, it wasn't..how is 1 page long..?..so frustrated want to know what happens next!

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