by nickiche
I'm glad you're continuing on with the story, but you really need to get some editing help. The errors were a bit distracting. Can't wait to read more though!
love it .. cant wait to read more .. maybe longer chapter next ??
for this installment of the story. I've read each of the other chapters, repeatedly. I love the dynamic between Taylor & Nicki and I can't wait until the next chapter. Also, I agree that some editing would do some good. Other than that, very well done!
I love this series...I sincerely hope you continue :)
I hope you continue this story. I'm really getting into the characters and have been enjoying them. I really hope the girls end up together, eventually. However, there will probably be lots of drama till then. I do think you need to get an editor to run through it to catch the bugs though. I can't wait for the next installment.
Lovely story, its very interesting, the characters are great but please do a thorough editing. Looking forward for the next awesome chapter.
What happens next???! Pleas don't wait a month to write the rest of the story. Will be looking forward to it.