All Comments on 'My First Taste of Submission'

Great writing but I do like each submission to be a complete chapter. TBC is an unwelcome finding in the middle of an otherwise good read.

Sorry Kiwi you've probably a very good point there - that would probably bug me too now I think of it. Just wanted to share what I had so far to see what people thought and it was getting longer than expected...... :)

And not allow ANYONE to post unfinished stories. You get a "1" for posting uncompleted work. BAH!

I gave you a 5 just for the anon comments about not finishing a chapter. They don't seem to understand the meaning of the word cliffhanger. please, continue your story.

The only thing I can say is I wish it were a little longer, so maybe that's what they were referring to.

Keep writing!

Your style of writing is makes for a relaxed read. Same brain waves. More please!