All Comments on 'My First Time'

Oh how I wish I had been Zlatan! 5 stars.

You as a virgin used to break in a male virgin was an interesting take on this genre. I'd like this story to be longer with more descriptions during the sex. This could have been much hotter. Thanks though, good read.

I liked this a lot: it was hot and seemed highly realistic. Great job on your first go at writing a story.

Being from Denmark myself, I love reading from Danes as I can see the familiarities in the story. You write very well indeed.

Great writing for your first try. Please keep writing you have a talent.

Great story. Very erotic

Great story. Need more

A whore begins her nasty life.

My life is great, thank you very much 26thNC.

Hmmm... Married guy rapes a teenager, while his younger brothers, who are only pretending to be friends, help him. It frightens me a little that anybody considers this erotic. If that had been your daughter or sister, I hope you would feel differently.

This has to be one of the best stories/writings I have read in a long time. The way you the details written leaves ones imagination running with vivid images.