All Comments on 'My First Time as a Sissy'

First time as a sissy?

Hopefully LAST TIME as an author!

Honestly, hon, there's NOTHING to this.

No description or emotion; very clinical

You list what happens. The other reviewers are right. No emotion, and I agree. Please make this your last time as an author if this ia all the better you can do.

you could probably rewrite this and make a decent, if unoriginal story. I don't want to discourage you but this story was pretty flat.

After reading it my only question was did he get his disposal fixed?

Like the title said....

What do the others know...

"No emotion" blah blah blah

Duhhh ... not a romance novel, boys!

Besides, there was plenty of emotion.

Fine first job, Sissy.Tara. You go, girl!

As a first effort, this is great. It's a brief account of a first encounter for a cross dresser. Fairly well written, as a sequence of events. Please continue writing.

But!

Don't let them get you down. It takes time to get a feel for how to compose a good story and I think you've done an admirable job for your first time. By all means, keep writing.

I'm not surprised that the comment to let this be your last attempt was posted anonymously ... he/she didn't have the courage to use a real name. When I post a criticism, I give the author the opportunity to contact me directly.

Let the haters hate, but continue writing despite their negativity.

Not to bad of a start. Keep it going.

First time as a sissy, I dressed up and drove around. I went to the Mall and shopped for my fetish attire. I felt funny after mom gave me my vitamins. I came home and went to bed. I woke up with Mom on top of me. "I like what you are wearing, mom said." Put it in my pussy deep". I didn't know what to do. We fucked and fucked. The vitamins she gave me were stimulating. I felt so hot and sexy as I fully slid into mom's wet cunt......

After mom gave me my sissy clothes, at first I was not sure what to do. "Mom, I think that they are very nice but.".... "I expect you to put them on son"! We argued about the pretty outfits. I felt funny. I eventually went with Mom to her bedroom. We dressed up in pantyhose and silky smooth panties and bra and high heels. I felt so hot and sexy.

I love this story. I wish I would get caught dressed up and treated like the sissy CD faggot slut that I am. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

hugs & kisses,

cdCindy1

Ohhh Christine so wants to becumm Crissy!!! Have a "Raul" to discover hur....and finally have a yummy Cock enter my MouthPussy....Mmmm 💋🍡💧💦💦💧💖✨

what a great story. we should all be so lucky as to come out like that.

I loved it! I am so envious. I wish I had a Raoul of my own!

Fucking bent cunt. I hope you get fucking aids and die

I've always been afraid to get wearing girls clothes, since I was young and was punished for it. Today, those fears continue, in a way, so to speak. I'm still a very discreet crossdresser. This story about being found out taken advantage of is arousing to read, but in reality, I'd feel that my life would change more than I wanted it too. Raoul blackmailing him is even hotter to read! I'd probably have to accept being Raouls cocksucker too, in those circumstances!