by Grey_Eyes
Congratulations on your first submission. It was a very well put together, sexy story with a nice pacethat built to a suitable climax!
I hope we'll be seeing more fromyou.
What a superb vignette of sexual awakening. Real, gritty, and quite simply well written. A fantasy, or a remembered memory from early days? A sweet innocence tempered with yearning and learning, and exploration of new found sexual awareness. You simply must write more, I found this highly entertaining, and erotically charged, very arousing. Nice to read something which isn't crude-rude, but rather fresh! More - please!
That is such a mix of innocence, sex and voyeurism on both your part and the mothers. Thank you so much for sharing!