All Comments on 'My Freaky Senior Prom'

Really enjoyed your take with great charaters and obviously very hot sex scenes!

Well that was one of the BEST teen stories I've ever read!!! But for the unlikely science of it all, very realistic characters, circumstances, and dialogue!! And, It truly reminded me very much of my own first high school love!! Awesome work Somethingfar!! 5- Big Stars for you!!!

A truly original plot here on Literotica - complete with twists and still more twists.

This piece is about as entertaining as any I’ve read on this list, and way more so than all but a very very few.

More like a 4.5* than a 5 in turns of assess. Well written. Bravo for creating a fresh take on an old-ish story. ill make a point of reading more of your material.

Absolytely amazing. Had me enthralled the whole time.

There is so much more to be told about this couple! University. Spring Break. Weddings (walking down the aisle stuck in the others body?), pregnancy, raising kids, swinging?, old age, widowhood?

This was really goos!

Really nice job!

Absolutely loved it, will be looking forward to a pt.2

This is the best story on the site! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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That was kind of cute, sexy and romantic all in one. Sort of like having a love affair with your self. The premise of changing bodies was sort of sex fantasy along with being kind naughty? Very nice story and very tantalizing. 5 stars

Simply fantastic.

A wonderful, imaginative, well written story. Great Job

Enjoyed this quite a bit.

What a surprisingly terrific read that was!

Very romantic and lovely considering the body swap theme.

Well done

Thank you all for the lovely comments. Glad you enjoyed the story! I'm not ruling out a sequel at some point, I'm guessing these two could get into some fun situations at college together.

Amazing

Colour me surprised, I loved this, congrats on a truly different tale than normally found here.

Thanks!

Love it. The beat body swap I think I’ve read so far on this site. Good job

Always been one of my fantasies. Really nice job of putting it together. Must have been a challenge. Goes in my favorites ...

Oh goodie, another story for the April Fools competition that actually has a prank in it. Several I've read so far just don't. It's sweet and gooey and just captures that first time, prom, 18 age vibe just beautifully. Giving it a 5.

This was a lot of fun and quite exciting. :)

Loved the story. I think I might have an alternate ending for you. My one complaint is cross country. Cross country would be great for a Halloween story but not April Fools. Use Track instead. They can still train on the cross country trail. I would like to know how that regional meet went. The one version of this story I saw on YouTube had the girl Playing football as the guy while he as the girl was trying to do an interview. But in this case, both would be at the meet.

Wow!! Simply Wow. I loved this story! Wishing I could give more than five stars and hoping for a sequel.

This begs out loud for a sequel. These two are going to have a set life together like no other!

Yes, we know it's not true, but it's so well-told that it doesn't matter. A superb April Fool's Day story, easily worth twelve stars. Good luck in the contest.

Well done. The hint of male bisexual lust was nice, him sucking his cock while inside her body. Wish I could do that. When I was young, I was flexible enough to get the head of my cock in my lips, with some pain. Only managed to cum once that way. I wish I'd done more.

Undoubtedly one of the best stories I've read on Literotica. Not only well written and easy to read, but clearly edited and carefully reviewed. Sex scenes were tasteful and believable. Great work on expressing Theo's range of feelings after the switchover. I would love to read a few chapters from Lily's perspective... Keep up the good work!

that was an amazing story, one of the best I’ve read. you’re very talented.

please continue this storyline of Lilly and Theo. i’m sure their college days would be just as raunchy.

Very nice...nice timing. Thank you for sharing your tallent

Nice story. I expected there to be more about their birthday parties and how each of them handled being with the wrong families. Potential for a lot more angst and stumbles.

Τhey have writen everything I wanted to write, so I 'll just go withQIt's the most worthy fof first place story I've read all my years in Literotica!

A well written fun story.

Very entertaining page-turner. I think the theme could become a romance novel with a little less graphic sex and a more believable explanation for body-switching.

That was a lot of fun to read. Loved how each had to adjust to being a different sex. Good character depth. 5 stars. Thank you! 😊

This has easily become one of my favorite stories here. Great characters and hot sex. The build up to their first fuck in the other person's body was wonderful. I loved the perspective of Theo exploring his/ Lily's body. Now how about a chapter written from Lily's parallel perspective in a male body ... (getting to pee standing up ... Theo gets to experience mentral cramps ...lol)

This was well deserving of First Place

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Well, I'm going to stop just short of "Best I've Ever Read". But "Best in a Very Long Time" for sure!!!

That is a great story! Well written, well edited. I am amazed by how you kept the pronouns straight.

Fun body swap story. Reminded me of "I will fear no evil" by Heinlein. The rival thing was a fun twist. Loved it.

Great fun, sexy as hell, a great fantasy to indulge in. Good characters that we care about, who respond in believable ways. Of course everybody knew better than they did that they belonged together! So realistic. And well written. A good story, very well told. With tantalizing sexy bits.

Who could ask for anything more?

Thanks for the best read, that I couldn't put down even though I was supposed to be making dinner.

Please keep writing!!!!!

Great story! The only thing that put me off was cross country is a fall sport — not spring. Otherwise it was well written

What story wish I could fall into their lives also.

Great imagination and beautifully told. Thank you.

Very well done!

This was a great story, and you are one of the most promising new writers on Lit. Hoping for many more stories from you, either here or out in the Real World... your stuff is worth paying for.

Wonderful!

Wonderful story!

Great writing, fun characters, hot sex scenes, One of the best stories on the site.

you have a way of writing that draws the reader in, keeps the interest up, keep writing.....

Professional-grade work. Really enjoyed reading this one.

OMG! This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here. Great job!

That was such a great story! I felt like I was each of the characters, and I very much want the story to go on.

Thank you for sharing it.

Great story, I've noticed a few stories in Literotica about gender switching but wasn't interested in reading them. If they're anything like this story of yours I'm going to have to read some more of them, but it's unlikely they'll be as good as your tale.

Wonderful gender switch story where the characters felt real, in both their genders. I was puzzled why the switch didn’t happen at the height of their climax, when they were joined and experiencing bliss and blackouts anyway!

Very well written, thank you for the story.

Terrific!

Terrific! Fantastic! I'm not sure that those words do this story justice. It was sweet, it was loving, and even though it was science fiction, it was also convincing. Superb job on mastering the art of both male and female emotions because as I sat on the edge of my chair I kept waiting for one or the other to blow the cover, but it never came. Bravo!

Fan-freaking-tasctic! Couldn't put it down. Love the character building. Made it feel so believable. Another excellent story!

what a great story !! we want more!

Great writing, very believable, except for the 9 inch cock part

Fantastisk, one of the best i've read

I seldom give 5 stars but your story deserves them! Thanks for sharing.

A definite 5! I occasionally had trouble keeping the “body” straight with the person. . . a Who’s who?” I can’t imagine how talented you must be as an author to keep this straight while writing it??? Looking forward to more!

Well done. Teanage angst to the next level.

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Great story and awesome sexual twist on the freaky Friday thing!

This tale puts you in a top long story author status. Only the most talented writers are able to control a story of this length especially with all the body shifting going on. I have a firm spot in my heart and brain for Lily and Theo and hope that we might have a continued experience of their college life. Zoey could be a bigger part of the periphery story and Adam and Chrissy may also have a part. I had no trouble accepting the premise of the switch. It added a whole new angle on their relationship. I'll be reading more of your posts.

Great story and excellent sexual descriptions with a twist like the Freaky Friday vibe, really enjoyed reading it excellent story.

Most excellent! 5/5

A fun story! Imagine the obstacles down the road. They have sex... so they switch bodies. At some point Lily has to go do Theo's job, and vice versa. If Lily is a lawyer and Theo is a mechanical engineer.... how does that work? A sequel might be fun too.

I really enjoyed this story a lot. Not only was it well written, but the storyline was fun and sweet as well. I'd love to see more. It would be great to see them get married and go through pregnancy/birth, the whole experience swapping back and forth like that. Keep up the good work.

I really want to experience this with my wife ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️