All Comments on 'My Freshman Year Ch. 06'

I love how each of your stories is a little different from the other. Please continue this series!!! Mew

I'm not going to lie it was good. I like both the characters but we can tell that a guy wrote this. No lesbian would say these type of things(especially during the sex part and describing of Natalya in your story.......) I should know I'm a lesbian myself. So that made the story fucking lame. Better luck next time

Are you ever going to add to this? Its a good series

ARE YOU GOING TO ADD ANOTHER , THIS SERIES IS AWESOME

Having read all six chapters, I have to say that as usual the quality of your writing is quite good. But "My Freshman Year" was disappointing in that there was almost no plot, just sex. At the outset I thought that the story could have been accommodated in one rather than six chapters but then it would have become monotonous. You are a decent writer, PJ, and some of your other stories have bordered on the excellent. This could have been so much better had you had a good strong plot with more drama and less the sex. The "Terry" stories provide a good example of how this one could have been if you had taken the trouble.