All Comments on 'My Friend Sophia'

the story was quite good. The only problem I found was thatyour spelling is spotty in a few places. You might want to print it out and read it over on paper before you submit it. If you have problems with spelling you may want to getsomeone who is good at it to go over it for you as there were several words that spell check wouldn't have noticed(they were spelled right, but not the word you were looking for). Nice narrative style

I agree with the other comment. Not bad, but your spelling and grammer really need to be looked at, as it is sometimes difficult to read.

I somehow think you were remiss in letting this lady get away-she sounds very special.

I enjoyed the story although I think you could flesh it out a bit. I am a Native American and wish that the girls i meet when i go to the reservation to vote on council members looked that good or were that kinky.

You said he should check his spelling and "grammer". And you should check your spelling and GRAMMAR.

I thought the story was well thought out. Could use more desciptive wording but overall a great read and too the point. Thanks for writing.