All Comments on 'My Friend's Daughter Ch. 05'

by fireman_2000

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

OH My Good what a great story so far ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good, but why

Why did you switch to the third person more in this chapter? It was better when you kept it more first person...

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