All Comments on 'My Friend's Father with THAT Smile'

Nicely-paced story, but the ending seemed completely in mid-air. Hope you continue this one soon.

Just kidding. I hate <i>novels</i> that end on a cliffhanger, but for a serialized story, it's perfect.

I'll get in touch with the folks here...trust me there was a LOT more

Sorry for all the hassles folks (and to the folks here at Lit)....:)

Wonderful set up, and a great ending. I loved it when Joanne finally got bold and went for what she wanted. Well done. Keep up the good work.

Gina

Honestly, I did like it when I thought it was a serialized story, but thrilled to read the rest of it

Best story I. Read this week :-)

This is my fav story of yours so far.Joanne reminded me of myself when I was shy and timid.The sexual tension was arousing and the climax of the story was satisfying.

It took a while to get to the ‘meat’ of the sex portion, but a really good story. With polishing and fixing of some grammatical errors might make a good short erotic story you could actually sell if you haven’t already. :-). Really enjoyed it. Thank you.

Super long and drawn out story and unrealistic because she came too quick with so little manipulation

OUTSTANDING! Magnificent! I think this is probably the best story I've every found on Literotica. You're a very good writer. I usually find myself skipping entire paragraphs and even pages worth of text in some of the longer stories but NOT in this case. I read every single word and loved every moment of the story. I'm going to go through your other stories and read them all in hopes of finding another gem like this one.

I hope you're still writing! Thank you for sharing your gift.

Fun but way too wordy. It took ‘till the end for any sex at all.

Bill S.